Day 3: Skin. Prose Poem. Internal Rhyme.
Here is my assignment for Day 3 which I have no clue whether makes sense ? I clearly am writing this with no much experience! A first hand try in this Prose poetry and a totally new topic to deal with! The moment I read the topic for the day, I knew what I was about to write ~ Racism! A normal scene in the world of today! I wrote this in accordance with a story by ‘Umm Zakiyyah’ ~ the Hearts We Lost! It has held me tight on my seat! She ‘Iman’ was mistreated by her blood relatives, so how is she supposed to expect respect from others? Be with me through this emotional poetry she writes, I really don’t know how much she must have gone through but I hope I express this right! Please bear with my mistakes and let me know whether I’ve done justice to the topic we have received! As you already know, your comments are something I reach out for! 😉
Sometimes I look at my Skin, wondering could it be a sin. Just because of my skin color, do I have to suffer? Looking at Hasna I know I’m not the lucky one! Having same parents doesn’t mean we look like One! She inherited those hazel eyes and fair skin, making sure the on lookers were left amazed therein! While I was left with a total rummage, which comes down the line in my dad’s lineage! My mom had married against her parent’s wish, as she never believed in racial discrimination as demonish! As a result of her family’s stand, me and dad were literally banned! Being like my mom she was privileged, she got to accompany her to see our maternal lineage! Everyone still blames mom for marrying my ‘Black’ dad, never did once they consider us humans, sad! What my mother did was a crime unforgivable, but when mom went with baby Hasna her being accepted was typical! Still the injustice of her Pakistani desi culture unnerved my mommy, as my colors and looks made my acceptance a bomb! Once having known this face of reality, I had to keep that distance from this world of cruelty!
But in spite of these, I still don’t understand why the bond between me n Hasna has to freeze! Should I not be the one to hate her for her looks though? Is it coz I’m mommy’s baby girl God knows! I hope one day she realizes the favors she receives, instead of being rude and stubborn maybe show me a minimal care I deserve! Now looking at Hasna’s fiancé, my thoughts wandered back to the deepest betray! I am fat, dark and unattractive, why do I even dream of having a man desiring? My grandparents who are my closest relatives, fail to accept I am even alive! So let alone what he may desire!
Still I wonder what to call myself, a Pakistani – American- Black American or an Outlander self!? Just because of my skin color, do I have to suffer? I ponder!
My mother also married beneath her. Her side of the family never acknowledge us until I went abroad and marry a European, then they started talking to us but for me it is too late.
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OMG! That must have been real hard for you.. I see! This wasn’t right! But see God rewarded you with an awesome husband and loads of happiness for bearing all of it with MIGHT! 😀 ❤ My sister we are all having some test or another in this world! but thank God you are really appearing to be a very strong darling here!
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My children are the greatest gifts I’ve ever received.
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Aww I can see the pride and happiness you with hold! 😀 May God Almighty keep it forever in your life! 😉
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Okay
To understand this… I ought to know who is “Hasna”?
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haha ok.. Hasna is her sister, its expressed I thought in the sentence,” Having same parents doesn’t mean we look like One!” Sorry for the confusion I’ve caused.. 😉
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Well I read in a hurry and maybe didn’t get it correctly….
Mistake was mine I believe…
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lol.. its fine my dear! Everyone makes a mistake! U expressed what you felt! I have no complains regarding that! thanks for taking pain to read though! 😉
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Okay…if you were like my pal here in India… I would had reacted in more friendly and informal way…
Lol… But keeping the formal form… It’s fine… It’s fun to read what you write…
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hahaaha I knw the difference! you really don’t have to point it out now! Lolz.. Apparently all Indians are the same irrespective of the state they are from.. ahaha
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In time…dear…
When it’s the right time…
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hehe.. 😛
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Powerful!
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awww that’s a huge smile on face! I am happy I have ben able to express it! 🙂
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I think a lot of us can relate. I certainly can, even though I’m a different race.
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Aww I know that’s a reality.. no religion professes this! It’s a huge sin according to all!
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I can’t access your site apparently, has it been deleted somehow?!
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That’s weird. Here’s the link to my assignment for today. https://thethingsiyell.wordpress.com/2015/10/07/summer-brown/
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oh thnx 🙂
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An outcast,tough to live with that.Well written:)
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aww I’m truly happy to hear that! I feel like I’ve put my efforts not in vain 😉
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🙂 🙂
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Where is your post! I’ve been waiting to see that for long!
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I will post it in a few minutes.Thank you for the words of encouragement 🙂
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haah sure thing.. I will wait to see that for sure! 😉 Plz forward me the link.. So that I may be the frst one to read it!
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Yes.I will! 🙂
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heeh Deal! 😉
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Heya…This is what I wrote…any feedback is appreciated:)
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ok lemme read! 🙂
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When it comes to racism and discrimination due to skin color, I wish we’re all color blind as little children probably are.
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So true.. well expressed!! It isn’t fair to anyone!!
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This is a heartbreaking and beautiful poem, Ishma! I think you are fortunate to be of two different races/cultures, and while it’s hard right now, I hope you grow into your skin and love it, because I’m sure it’s beautiful. You will have the lens and the perspective that others from both sides of the family will not, and it will be the source of poems and stories. Use your power and perspective to keep writing! Blessings.
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Aww thankyou for youe comments my dear!! It truly gives me the positive vibes! But apparently this is not my story but a story of a girl named Iman written by Umm Zakkiyah in her book ‘Hearts we have lost’ 😉 My parents are both from same place and I belong to India 😉 hehehe !! Those words of wisdom you have shared are truly of BIG value though!! Thankyou dear!
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Ah well, I must have missed something in your post, or in your comments, because I didn’t catch it!
Sorry!
Thanks for setting me right!
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oh please don’t be sorry! 😀 I love the comment you gave! If it were about me, I truly would have been relieved reading it! 😉
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Yup, I missed the long introduction to your poem! “My bad,” as they say here!
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hah am sorry for having elongated it! 😛
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Nice of you to share such a personal poem. My own view is pakistani, american etc. are all just labels too. I think we are all unique and perfect as we are, we don’t need words to limit us.. but maybe I shouldn’t criticise words on a poetry assignment haha
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hehe But I really appreciate the comments u’ve made and a point I would Like to make clear is that this isn’t my story! 😛 Its about a girl named ‘Iman’ whom I tried to express what she has gone through! Thankyou though! 😉
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Great post which encompasses the reality of every culture in the world because of lies. Thanks for visiting my blog. Blessings.
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heeh thankyou my sister! 😀 Same too.. May Almighty bless you with abundance of Love! 😉
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Your words highlighted the pain and discrimination which truly happen in this modern world. This is so heartfelt and so honest. I feel you through your well-chosen words.
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aww that’s so sweet of you to comment! I’m really touched by the words u have used in this moment! 😉 Thanks a lot, this comment made my day!
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Yay! That’s good to hear!
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Had to read it again and again.So please excuse another comment! 😛 (Did that rhyme?…LOL)
It is a beautiful prose poem.The reality is been written out here.And her sister Hasna is proud,no wonder.After ll the love and favours she gets,she is spoiled!But she is going to find someone greta…I know it!
Because beauty is what is inside,and Hasna doesn’t sound one bit appealing!!!
I just had to write this.And share my thoughts with you 🙂
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Yo it did a lil, lolz.. …hahaha No worries, I really appreciate the pain you took to re read it! 😉 aww that’s truly amazing!! Words People like Iman should keep hearing… I too hope she does.. that story was truly great and yes Hasna wasn’t much appealing but I can’t blame her as she was struggling herself with problems much amazing! 😛
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Yup,and that rhymed.
Happy to have spent time,
reading your post! 🙂 😛
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haha awww.. that’s so sweet of you my dear! 😉
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I don’t understand racial intolerance, because I find races and ethnicities fascinating to experience and wonderful to learn about. I’m sure intolerance has a great deal to do with culture. I’m sure it does in my, our American culture. (For those readers from the USA.) While I don’t get prejudice, I do get angry about it. And feel pressed to speak out. And I do. To me, difference is, simply, so much fun! How sad to be universally whatever. How bland and unpromising. The way you use “color” and “suffer” not only get across an engaging internal rhyme but become a kind of litany. Especially as you repeat these words. A litany traditionally requires a response. So, world, what’s our response going to be? I’m going to continue enjoying (and teaching) the pleasure in knowing those who are different from me and us. Thank you!
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wow.. A marvelous comment indeed.. Thankyou 😀 means a lot! I know each word you pointed out are absolutely true! Yes the world must react!! But how can they when they themselves practice racism one way or another!?
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Great question. I don’t know. Cycles and patterns of racism have to be broken. That probably won’t happen without cost. But it’s worth welcoming and reaching out to the variety of folk we are. For me, it’s often fun! Hey, a global block party. How about that? Thank you! again for your forthright words.
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hehe I think I should be thanking you Am I not right? 😉
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You’re welcome. But thank you for the truly important thoughts your raise.
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🙂 My dream to do this, to raise awareness!! To give those suffering souls some sense of relief! 🙂
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Yesterday’s and today’s posts, the poems, were inspired by you. Simply my small way of joining with you.
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awww That’s soo sweet!! I never realized I had inspired another to write! thank you!! I truly feel inspired to write more due to your comments, in spite of my lack of time! 😀
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I can appreciate lack of time. But when you can, what you have to say is good for everyone to hear.
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Am pretty much pleased! thank you!
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“thoughts you raise,” I meant to say
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Your posts are truly one to look forward to..And hence when I got the chance,I just had to nominate you for The one lovely blogger award.
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Have a good day ahead 🙂
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aww Sabah.. that’s soo sweet of you to! :* I truly felt soo happy to see that u’ve nominated me! boosts my spirit and encourages me to out in all efforts!
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Ia m happy it did 🙂
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ehehe us the BEST! 😛
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Yes,surely!! 😀
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hahaha! 😀
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You are worthy. Wishing you love and peace.
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Thankyou dear.. But this is poem isn’t about me, rather it is about a character I’ve read in a story! 😀
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Oh, I see. Sounds like a great book. Your prose writing made it feel so personal and written with such empathy of the subject that it, too, shows what a worthy writer/poet you are.
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aww that was soo sweet of you!! Thankyou soo much!! 😀 made me smile wide! 😀 Yes surely a beaustiful book indeed it was.. 😀
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😀 hehe! Right!!! 😉
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