You told me to,
Close my eyes and walk!
I did so,
Coz you were there right beside me!
You told me to,
Make my promises last!
I did so,
Coz I thought you were sincere to me!
You told me to,
Be beside you forever!
I did so,
Thinking you would do the same!
You told me to,
Trust you blindly!
I did so,
Coz I thought you were the one for me!
You told me to,
Walk on thorny paths!
I did so,
Thinking you would lead me through it!
You told me to,
Give you my heart!
I did so,
Hoping you would handle it delicately!
U told me to,
Lend you my shoulder to lie upon!
I did so,
Thinking you were gonna tell me your worries!
You told me to,
Stay away from you!
I did so,
Thinking it was for you to come running back to me!
But you never told me,
All these were just mere dreams never to be fulfilled!
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Speechless.. Why do people forget the most important promises they make in love? Time is a cruel demon which changes them to the extent that we forget ourselves, too.. Beautiful poetry..
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I know my dear.. I know!! Thankyou!! I try to finish off my frustrations through these poems! 🙂 Thankyou! 😀
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Beautifulllllllllllllllllll.
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thankyou dear 🙂
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Awwww this was so beautiful Ish. I love the repetition of You told me too!! Good one
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awwww Aaliyah… thank you soo much!! 😀 Whatever written must be beautiful they say, I wrote this with all my emotions bubbling within! 😦
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The emotions show in the poem Ish. Good job 🙂
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thankyou ! :* And Ish is what my bestie calls me!! I think you just stole that right!! No worries, I am ready to let you have that! 😛
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Awwww aren’t you just the sweetest? Let your friend have it. I shall call you Ishy Wishy 😛
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hahaha wow.. that’s a new name! 😛 😉 And it sounds really cute too!! 😛 U might end p making me *blush* now! 🙂 ❤ ok shall I call you Aalu? 😛 haha.. I really like calling Aalu! 😛 😉 If you grant me the permission … hehehe! :*
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This was hurtful but wonderful
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I knw! haha thankyou btw! 😀
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Unambiguously wrote.
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thankyou dear.. I really wanted to know though, is it meant to be a compliment! 😛 😉 Just a doubt! 😉
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Unambiguously wrote,
Because I liked what you thought!
I did so. 😛 😉
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haha.. ok! 😀 thankyou soo much! 😉 ❤
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…..but you never told me,
All these were just mere dreams.
Never to be fulfilled.
You watched my heart drop at your feet,
instead of stopping to embrace..
you chose to walk away.
I held to my dreams and then fate yanked me away..
From the rollercoaster ride-
Your web of heart-deceptions.
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wow… these words are amazing.. perfect … Where are they from? :O You wrote them?? Wow!! Ok let me google that description you have given below! 😛 Tell me they are your words.. It’s soo beautiful! 😀
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They are mine.. Haha:) Wrote them on the spot too.
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Wow.. lady.. you are superb! 😀 I guess you can go ahead and post it now!! 😀 It is much better than mine.. I must say! 😛 hat’s off lady.. or shall I edit it into my post with you name? 😉
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I wrote it as a reply to your original poem so that’s all there is to it. I even started the first stanza with the last lines of your own poem. Glad you liked it.
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hhe I loved it! :* ❤
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