Assignment day 3: Writing 101
The secret I held so deep,
Made me feel so cheap!
As this secret rotted within me with years,
Made me lose interest in all affairs!
This secret you may term big or small,
Made me curl into a ball!
A secret I hate to admit to the rest of the world,
I lost myself to it so whorled!
How shall I spill this secret even to my beloved?
Scared of this secret being judged and losing trust, unloved!
How did this happen to me,
Which has affected my secrets yet to come for free!
Each time I think of this secret my heart begins a race,
With my mind going back to that chase!
What wrong did I do, I wonder?
Wasn’t I too small to keep a secret so thunder?
Whom shall I turn to, what will I do if they don’t trust?
Finally, I broke down to my best friend with a burst!
Could not hold that secret a minute long,
Afraid of losing my best friend all along!
But instead of firing me and cutting me off,
Tightly I was held to heart, making me laugh!
How grateful I feel after I talked this Secret out,
Talking therapy was something I should resort to without a doubt!
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Pearls Of A Hijabi Muslimah! 
I love her without revealing “the secret”, you took us on a journey of how it felt to be burdened with it and then to unburden it. ☺
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hahaah awwww Ameena.. Thankyou .. I know it must be a big burden.. I have seen my friend experience it and closely observed it too!!! Subhaan Allah.. We are soo blessed! 🙂
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I loved it…and how your friend forgave you in the end…I d want to know the secret though:P But you expressed all your feelings without revealing it…Very well written 🙂
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heheh!! I did try my best to keep it hidden only my bestie knows! 😛 hahahaa.. u wanna know really? 😉
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Yes….lol…Your posts always make me curious 😛
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hahaah It’s a secret… shhhh!!! 😛
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😛
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Beautiful post!
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Thankyou Marielli! 😀
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Your welcome 💋
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hehe :*
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Secrets that rot. Yes, they can do that. I imagine this is a rather universal reaction with us and secrets. Your work, then, brings that out for us to ponder and, who knows, make changes. Thanks!
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Yes absolutely, it rots sometimes so deep! We need to make the change and soon! 😀 We don’t deserve to rot, 😉 Thankyou so much 😀
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You’re welcome. Thank you. And you’re right, we don’t deserve to rot.
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😀 ❤
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I thought about how there are two types of secrets: the kind you want to keep in, and the kind you don’t dare to let out.
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Yes there are… but the worst part is when the secret is both, which is tooo bitter to be swallowed and even more Sour to be let out! (maybe sweet for the listener – as they have a new thing to backbite about) 😦 Such secrets kill you from within and make you a totally different person, no one knows why you changed and start blaming you this drives you even more nuts!! I think I might be confusing you even more!
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Agreed upon !
You ve truely discribed that.
Im really scared
about that feeling.
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yes it is a nightmare that I hope no one has to experience!! it is not so sweet to be tasted! 😥
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O who you’re Patient!
Bear a little more
Just a little more Remains.
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In sha Allah… Allah loves the As-Sabiroon! 😀
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Indeed
Only patience ones will successful.
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